This novelette is a finalist in the 2018 Nebula Awards. It is military SF/fantasy and was published in the anthology Expanding Universe, Vol. 4, edited by Craig Martelle and published by LMBPN Publishing. Virdi has been a finalist twice for a Dragon Award, once in 2016 for the fantasy novel Grave Measures, and again in 2017 for Dangerous Ways. Yudhanjaya Wijeratne is an established novelist, and this appears to be his first major award nomination. This review contains spoilers.
An asteroid called Messenger passes Earth; then another crashes into the moon, followed by an alien landing in Bangalore, India. Arjun Shetty is caught in the destruction and loses his wife and daughter. He is called up to fight and becomes one of the first Shikari called Vishnu, a giant cyborg warrior designed to fight the alien war machines. He brings down one of the machines in the ocean, drags it to shore where scientists are gathered to analyze it, and then suffers a malfunction—for a second he sees only the enemy, starts to fire on it again. Diagnostics can’t find anything wrong. An emergency in Bay 6 needs his attention. Bay 6 houses the Kali-Skikari, which has desynced and run amuck. Vishnu-Skikari destroys her, reports for debriefing and is sent in a transport back to Base. The transport is intercepted by war machines. Can Vishnu-Skikari defeat them?
I can see why these guys made the list of finalists. This is great stuff for a usually dull sub-genre—full of imagery, style and fire, featuring the Shikari cyborgs crashing over the line into violent godhood psychosis. Hm. Or are they? It’s is all pretty much steam-of-consciousness from Vishnu’s viewpoint, which gives us depth in understanding what goes on inside his systems. The other characters are poorly developed, but considering what Vishnu has become, their flatness and insignificance from his viewpoint is sort of understandable (and gets worse as the story goes on).
On the not so positive side, I’m not sure whose war machines attack Vishnu in the final battle. I suspect these are friendly forces, but a few better hints about this would have been helpful. And another little niggle: how many arms does Kali have? Four? Six? Or does she just sprout more as she needs them? Hm.
Recommended. Four and a half stars.




Mar 13, 2019 @ 21:44:34
No comments on this one? It’s the cause of all that virulence on Twitter, and I’ve rated it even with Pinsker’s story at 4 1/2 stars. That’s my best rating of this group so far.
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Mar 13, 2019 @ 21:54:48
I’m waiting for floppy to review it, so I can play “compare and contrast.”
Guess I’ll have a while to wait, eh? ~:D
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Mar 13, 2019 @ 22:09:23
He doesn’t seem to be getting to it. Residents on his site suggested there’s an access problem, but looks like it’s just $.99 on Amazon today.
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Mar 13, 2019 @ 22:21:35
@Lela —
“He doesn’t seem to be getting to it. Residents on his site suggested there’s an access problem, but looks like it’s just $.99 on Amazon today.”
Helloooooo, Cam posted a review of “Messenger” YESTERDAY (yesterday our time, 3/13 his time). Seriously, how unobservant are you guys?
https :// camestrosfelapton . wordpress.com/2019/03/13/nebula-novelettes-yudhanjaya-wijeratne-and-r-r-virdi-messenger/
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Mar 13, 2019 @ 22:29:45
I’m not sure this comment section is entirely in tune with reality…
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Mar 13, 2019 @ 22:28:40
I’ve found that it is easier to read my reviews when you read the blog. I’ve been working on psychic transfer but I haven’t got all the kinks out the system. Ray Davies, in particular, won’t leave.
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Mar 13, 2019 @ 22:58:25
Busy person here. Thanks for the tip. I had a look. Glad to see you like it, too.
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Mar 13, 2019 @ 23:01:39
Noted.
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Mar 13, 2019 @ 23:11:53
So, what do you think this does to the idea that Virdi and Yudhanjaya cheated to get on the finalist list?
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Mar 13, 2019 @ 23:20:02
I never thought they cheated so it doesn’t change my view very much. Did the 20booksto50K list help? Possibly, no easy way to tell. Also the novelette field was never going to be terribly revealing:
1. the novelettes that were finalist and on the list both had favourable comments about them already
2. Schoen was a likely contender anyway
3. Novelette is a bit of an under-served category
I thought short story would be a more relevant place to look than novelette.
The focus on Messenger seems to be purely based on Bellet and Yudhanjaya’s Twitter exchange – which all got resolved anyway. As far as I can tell they both left that argument on good terms.
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Mar 14, 2019 @ 09:03:36
>2. Schoen was a likely contender anyway
According to the standards of the day, the cultural appropriation should be a problem. Schoen is not in any way Asian, right?
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Mar 14, 2019 @ 00:31:37
The flopping camel said: “I never thought they cheated so it doesn’t change my view very much.”
So now slates are -not- cheating, eh? Good to know, floppy. I’ll remember this for the next time.
But then Calvin said: “Helloooooo, Cam posted a review of “Messenger” YESTERDAY (yesterday our time, 3/13 his time). Seriously, how unobservant are you guys?”
Generally I only read the camel flop blog when somebody warns me that floppy is lying about me again.
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Mar 14, 2019 @ 00:38:47
“So now slates are -not- cheating, eh?”
I’m aware of Yudhanjaya Wijeratne or R.R. Virdi promoting or compiling a slate of any kind. Why are you accusing them of doing so and what evidence do you have to back up your accusation?
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Mar 14, 2019 @ 00:39:42
Bugger – that was supposed to say “I’m aware of Yudhanjaya Wijeratne or R.R. Virdi promoting or compiling a slate of any kind. “
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Mar 14, 2019 @ 00:40:34
What the flip? “I’m **NOT*** aware of Yudhanjaya Wijeratne or R.R. Virdi promoting or compiling a slate of any kind. “
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Mar 14, 2019 @ 00:44:38
Well that’s that riposte ruined ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Mar 14, 2019 @ 04:32:47
floppy finally managed to type: “I’m **NOT*** aware of Yudhanjaya Wijeratne or R.R. Virdi promoting or compiling a slate of any kind.”
Its funny how that’s not what you said on your blog. Totally not a slate, nudge, wink, say no more. The blatant implication of slateyness got a much bigger response from The SJW Faithful than you expected, eh?
The problem with being a full-time jackass on the internet is that we can all go back and look, to see what was said.
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Mar 14, 2019 @ 04:36:25
//Its funny how that’s not what you said on your blog. //
Nothing on my blog ever said that *Yudhanjaya Wijeratne or R.R. Virdi * promoted or compiled a slate. By all means try to quote where I said that they did. You won’t be able to.
Not a claim I made or implied or even suggested.
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Mar 14, 2019 @ 07:58:34
@phantom —
“floppy finally managed to type: “I’m **NOT*** aware of Yudhanjaya Wijeratne or R.R. Virdi promoting or compiling a slate of any kind.”
Its funny how that’s not what you said on your blog. Totally not a slate, nudge, wink, say no more. The blatant implication of slateyness got a much bigger response from The SJW Faithful than you expected, eh?”
You know, Phantom, there are courses you can take to help with your reading comprehension problems.
Nobody that I know of has accused the **authors** of the Nebula-nominated stories of any underhanded activities at all.
As I’ve advised you many times, so far to no avail: it’s a really good idea to try READING what people have written before you start throwing stupid accusations around. As it stands now, you just make yourself look more and more stupid every time you post.
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Mar 14, 2019 @ 04:57:29
[sound of crickets…]
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